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HouSportsWriter
01-02-2010, 06:20 PM
the patroits game and it was silent thru out the land. but there was a man who despiced the texans. oh yes it was true. and he stayed up all night just waiting to make his move. HE snook out of bed carefull not to wake his wife he screamed the texans play off chances will be denied! so he snook over to the stadium and he placed hidden cameras left and right hopeing to steal some texans pride soon enough it was time to see if the texans will be denied.
the clock struck noon and it was time to rumble the texans went deep to the god andre johnson no one could stop him as it would seem so they went to the camras to see what they could see they saw kubiak talking not just talking to some one on his team he was talking to the comminshoner who has apparently saved the day kubiak laughed and pointed his way the big bad wolf had no more to say




i just thaught i would make a story and give yall some laughs hope yall injoy


:kingkong:

JB
01-02-2010, 08:13 PM
Wow

BSofA04
01-02-2010, 09:02 PM
:backsout:

Allstar
01-02-2010, 09:31 PM
slatonisabeast confirmed as a troll.

imatexan
01-02-2010, 09:42 PM
Probally the most creative post I have seen from you, spelling of course was terrible.

Thorn
01-02-2010, 09:46 PM
slatonisabeast confirmed as a troll.

He's not a troll. But he's not a good typist. LOL

GlassHalfFull
01-02-2010, 10:02 PM
He's not a troll. But he's not a good typist. LOL

^^^^This

Cjeremy635
01-02-2010, 10:31 PM
the patroits game and it was silent thru out the land. but there was a man who despiced the texans. oh yes it was true. and he stayed up all night just waiting to make his move. HE snook out of bed carefull not to wake his wife he screamed the texans play off chances will be denied! so he snook over to the stadium and he placed hidden cameras left and right hopeing to steal some texans pride soon enough it was time to see if the texans will be denied.
the clock struck noon and it was time to rumble the texans went deep to the god andre johnson no one could stop him as it would seem so they went to the camras to see what they could see they saw kubiak talking not just talking to some one on his team he was talking to the comminshoner who has apparently saved the day kubiak laughed and pointed his way the big bad wolf had no more to say




i just thaught i would make a story and give yall some laughs hope yall injoy


:kingkong:

I hate too much spice. Sometimes I would like to despice some of the meals I've gotten from a few restaurants.

LOL..j/k man. You know we just like to give you a hard time. Pretty good "story" you came up with. You lost the rhyming aspect in the last paragraph though. Other than that, if you would have hit the return button and created the proper spacing for breaks within the poem, it would have flowed a little better. Keep it up.