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HouSportsWriter
10-10-2009, 08:57 PM
game day write up bye me slatonisabeast....



schaub vs warner

warner..... 4 tds 4 int and 863 yards....vs..... 8tds3 int 1047 yards......

warner has the weapons but can he throw more touch downs this week then the previous weeks

schaub....can easly pick a part the cards but what "texans" team will show up

andra vs larry

larry is haveing a slow start 17 catchs 181 yards 2 tds

larry just needs a boost i expect the cardnals throw early to him to get his addreline runing

andra is doing beter at 20 catchs 336 yards 2 tds if andra gets open watch out but i think there guna spread the field with owen and walter



cards OFF vs texans DEF

the momentum of last weeks game vs oak will make the texans def energized and it will make it hard for larry and kurt to be successful

but if that dosent happen look for a verry long day....

texans OFF vs cards DEF


texans will pick a part there defence with there wide recivers wait for the play actions to come around toward the end of the 1st to the end of the half

spechal teams....

texans and cardnels

texans jj....will make us lose if he dose not understand how to catch he is a threat when your less thinking about it so no one evan think about jacoby


pre game grades


..............................texans,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,cards....
coaching....................B-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,b-,,,,,,,
widerecevers,..............B+..................... .................A+......
runingbacks..................C-.....................................C-........
offenceline....................B+................. ....................c-.......
defline..........................C-......................................d+.....
qb.................................a-,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,b+......
corners...........................f+.............. .......................d+.....
linebackers......................B+............... ........................C-....
safteys...........................c+.............. .........................c-....


final score texans win 27,....cards 21



post if this was helpfull and rank 1-10 1 being bad 10 being good

mattieuk
10-10-2009, 09:19 PM
Lol....nice effort. Would love some better grammar though!

Agree with most of what you said. I don't know how our receivers can only be a 'B+', but you're right about keeping Fitz quiet. Not 100% in acceptance with saying that the defense needs to keep the momentum going from last week. I think last week was looking like our defense for much of the year, just with the stupid as heck long plays not being given up...hopefully the Cards game provides more 'dumbass free' defensive plays.

TheIronDuke
10-10-2009, 09:28 PM
That was a very well-thought-out, in-depth, and coherent pregame analysis.

I'm thinking our spechal teams will be lights out and perhaps Jacoby is up for another big play!

Also, Andra is a good football player, I think he could maybe have a good game against the Cardnels but perhaps he won't.

We've been haveing a tough season thus far. Perhaps we can break this funk and really bring it to the Cardnels. I hope our defence is ready because that Larry guy is good. Hopefully our safteys play a better game than the previous few weeks.

Again, excellent thread. I look forward to reading your thoughts about the Texans every week! :texflag:

TheIronDuke
10-10-2009, 09:30 PM
Hey, wait a minute, shouldn't you be posting this on your blog, Richard Justice?

HouSportsWriter
10-10-2009, 09:36 PM
if i get more reviews ill work on grammer and work on next week

HouSportsWriter
10-10-2009, 09:46 PM
wow who put the 1..... i worked hard on this and i bet the person who did put is to afraid to voice there own opinon

jppaul
10-10-2009, 10:27 PM
Solicit reviews and then whine when a review is not high enough, that is an interesting one.

rmartin65
10-10-2009, 10:44 PM
wow who put the 1..... i worked hard on this and i bet the person who did put is to afraid to voice there own opinon

I will own up to it, I gave you a one. Do you wish to know why?

Your complete disregard of English grammar (ugh, I hope I used the right "Your" there). You seem not to care about if it is legible or not, you just go ahead and type what is going through your head. You overuse the period and comma buttons. "....................." and ",,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,," are extraordinarily annoying to read. It is OK once in a while as a trailing off method, but not every other sentence.

Your misspelling of words and names are truly amazing, considering the computer recognizes errors and gives you a nice line underneath them. And if you right click on a misspelled word, it will give you a couple options. It is a pretty cool piece of technology.

I could go on, but I am tired and need to get to work on some homework. Have a nice day.

SteveSlaton20
10-10-2009, 11:05 PM
just wondering, what school do you go to?...

mattieuk
10-10-2009, 11:20 PM
just wondering, what school do you go to?...

I'm not sure. Is his avatar for University of Ottawa?

:rolleyes:



I'm calling it now. I thought you were a jokey kid to begin with, but I honestly think that you can only be a wind up now (a joke for all non-English posters).

PapaL
10-10-2009, 11:31 PM
offence = discredited immediately.

buddyboy
10-10-2009, 11:46 PM
Quite possibly your best post yet...still need to work on your spelling and grammar. I don't mind a few mistakes here and there, we all make typos and silly mistakes, but this is way above and beyond what is usually the norm, even on the internet.

As far as your analysis, there's no way our safeties are a C+ and theirs are a C-. Our safeties are probably around C-, theirs are probably a solid B to B+.

The effort and thought was there, but work on the fine tuning more with your spelling, capitalization, and formatting and you'll really have a pretty decent post.

Allstar
10-11-2009, 12:30 AM
I honestly try to give this guy the benefit of the doubt most of the time, but I can't help but thinking this might be just a joke account. time after time he is both advised to, and taught how to correct his grammer/mistakes, and time after time he says he will. I've seen no improvement.

imatexan
10-11-2009, 02:57 AM
I honestly try to give this guy the benefit of the doubt most of the time, but I can't help but thinking this might be just a joke account. time after time he is both advised to, and taught how to correct his grammer/mistakes, and time after time he says he will. I've seen no improvement.

Agreed!

Andrew6
10-11-2009, 03:50 AM
I gave you a 10. Glad to see you're working on more well thought out posts. Also great to see what you lack in spelling abilities you make up for in heart. Looking forward to meeting you at the Seahawks game. Keep it up and disregard the negative posts about your grammer. Work on it GO TEXANS !!!

DocBar
10-11-2009, 07:09 AM
Judging your analysis, you're paying attention. That's a good thing. Judging your grammar, and going by your pregame grades, you must've been a Texans CB in English 101. I have a 15 yr. old son, so that helps in translation. I just wish it weren't necessary in either case. It really hurts my eyes and brain to read some of your posts, regardless of how insightful they may be.

Porky
10-11-2009, 07:23 AM
I''d give you an 8 on content and thought and a 2 on technical analysis (spelling, grammar, coherent sentence structure etc) so I split the difference and gave you a 5.

I think you have our safety's too high. They don't deserve a c+ yet although perhaps if our new additon can keep it up. We'll see. And I think you have their secondary underrated. Other than that no major gripes on the grades you have at the end. And remember, it's Andre not Andra!

Good job and hang in there kid. :dancer:

Corrosion
10-11-2009, 07:41 AM
Two pass happy teams with F and D grades in the secondary vs A and B grades for the recievers - I think the 48 point total is a bit low ....

Texan Asylum
10-11-2009, 09:01 AM
I''d give you an 8 on content and thought and a 2 on technical analysis (spelling, grammar, coherent sentence structure etc) so I split the difference and gave you a 5.

Good job and hang in there kid. :dancer:

I agree with what Pork posted.

Be encouraged by the constructive criticism you are receiving, constructive meaning those posts that try to help you in your deficiencies as a poster, not those that are intended to hurt you.

Keep working on your spelling and grammar as well. It makes for easier reading, and what you are trying to say, or mean, comes through much more clearer. These are things I often times struggle with. :goodluck:

Texan Asylum
10-11-2009, 09:09 AM
Here is a very easy to use spell check download that is free of charge. I use it on every post. It will not offer you any help for grammar, but it will most definitely help you with your spelling! If you want more favorable input from the other posters here, then use the spell check before you post your responses. Trust me, you will not be disappointed.

http://www.iespell.com/download.php

Txn_in_Oki
10-11-2009, 09:11 AM
I give you a 5. Nice post but when I see that you are the thread creator I know my head is going to hurt after reading what you have to say.

For all the crap you take over your spelling (including from me), your enthusiasm for Texan football always impresses the shit out of me and that's what counts.

Keep it up!

indiantexan
10-11-2009, 09:44 AM
I give you a 5. Nice post but when I see that you are the thread creator I know my head is going to hurt after reading what you have to say.

For all the crap you take over your spelling (including from me), your enthusiasm for Texan football always impresses the shit out of me and that's what counts.

Keep it up!

I gave you a 10. For all the flak that you take with regards your spelling on this board, your enthusiasm for Texans football is undiminished. We need more people like you! But please do learn to spell better. You will find ex-high school and college football players on this board who write very insightful posts with immaculate grammar. Bad grammar and poorly constructed sentences will attract a lot of negative attention (not just on this board!).

76Texan
10-11-2009, 09:58 AM
It's game day, so I'll give you a

:perfect10:

Just keep on writing.
Eventually, you will improve.
It will come naturally.

Buffi2
10-11-2009, 10:44 AM
I find it hard to read your posts because I keep getting out the old red pencil in my head and correcting it. Although, I do believe you are getting a bit better in the spelling and grammar dept - but, then, maybe I'm just hopeful. I'm rooting for you.

You obviously have a brain. You put thought into this post. I find it hard to comprehend the problem with using spell check. You will be so much more credible - not only here but in every other facet of your life if you just work as hard on the spelling and grammar as you do with analysis of the Texan games. Grammar and Spelling aren't nearly as complicated as football and much easier to learn; it just takes effort.

That is my old person, retired English teacher wisdom for the day.

Other than the English part - good post - and gave you a 5.

Andrew6
10-11-2009, 11:34 AM
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game day write up by me slatonisabeast.



Schaub vs Warner

Warner: 4 tds, 4 int, and 863 yards -vs- 8tds, 3 int , and 1047 yards.

Warner has the weapons but can he throw more touchdowns this week than the previous week.

Schaub has the ability to easly pick a part the Cards but what "Texans" team will show up


Andra vs Larry

Larry is haveing a slow start: 17 catchs, 181 yards, and 2 tds.

Larry just needs a boost I expect the cards. throw early to him to get his adreline running

Andre is doing better at 20 catchs, 336 yards, and 2 tds. If andre gets open watch out, but i think they're going to spread the field with Owen and Walter.




Cards Offense vs. Texans Defense:

The momentum of last weeks game vs. Oak will make the Texans def. more energized and it will make it hard for Larry and Kurt to be successfull.

If that dosent happen look for a verry long day...


Texans Offense vs. Cards Defense:


Texans will pick a part their defense with their wide recivers, wait for the play actions to come around toward the end of the 1st to the end of the half


Special teams:

Texans and Cardinals.

Texans Jacoby Jones-
Will make us lose if he does not understand how to catch. He is a threat when you're not thinking about it.

pre game grades:


Texans - Cards...
coaching: B- / B-
widerecever's: B+ / A+
runingback's: B- / C-
offenceline: B+ / C-
D-Line: C- / D+
QB's: A- / B+
CB's: F+ / D+
LB's: B+/ C-
Safety's: C+ C-

Final score- Texans: 27 , Cards: 21



Post if this was helpfull. Rank 1-10 1 being bad, 10 being good.

mattieuk
10-11-2009, 12:34 PM
Oh....thats what it said!

You did miss a 'haveing' but good work Andrew, rep to ya.

76Texan
10-11-2009, 12:38 PM
Oh....thats what it said!

You did miss a 'haveing' but good work Andrew, rep to ya.

LOL, I saw that too!

Buffi2
10-11-2009, 01:27 PM
Good job, Andrew.

There is also easily and catches

Andrew6
10-14-2009, 04:17 PM
Didn't think I did too bad for dropping out of high school. . . :spit: j/k... I went back have an associates now :choke:

Texan_Bill
10-14-2009, 04:32 PM
A for effort. F for execution. I give you a 5.





Now.......... Go hit the books!!!

gtexan02
10-14-2009, 07:57 PM
Got the score really close, just wrong team won :(

This thread is full of "win" I give you a 10